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by Devilgrrl87 » Thu 06 May, 2004 6:54 pm
This darkness is a shadowed curse, the base of all your fears. Though I would not change what I am, i've lived this way for years. Every night another life arrested in my arms, can't you hear it, can't you see it, Are you drawn into my charms? I bend your will to make you mine, you share your life with me.It is the blood flowing through my soul that makes me truely me. For centurys long i have been feared, the dark and deadly beast, every night another search for my deadly sinner's feast. As for the power which i speak, I never truely can retire. You've heard my tale, i've told the truth, I am the truth, VAMPIRE.
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by Lorraine » Sat 08 May, 2004 10:56 am
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then - in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life - was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then - in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life - was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.
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For Andrew and Hatewa
by Lorraine » Thu 03 Jun, 2004 10:47 am
Devilgrrl87 wrote on:
06 May, 2004 10:54 pm memoirs of the cursed...
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This darkness is a shadowed curse, the base of all your fears. Though I would not change what I am, i've lived this way for years. Every night another life arrested in my arms, can't you hear it, can't you see it, Are you drawn into my charms? I bend your will to make you mine, you share your life with me.It is the blood flowing through my soul that makes me truely me. For centurys long i have been feared, the dark and deadly beast, every night another search for my deadly sinner's feast. As for the power which i speak, I never truely can retire. You've heard my tale, i've told the truth, I am the truth, VAMPIRE.
devilgrrl87 says she wrote the above
If you go and read the thread you will see that all I did was copy paste
an Edgar Allen Poe [b]POEM[\b]
Lorraine
08 May, 2004 9:56 am
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then - in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life - was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.
-Edgar Allan Poe
I thought it was appropriate as it is just my opinion.
In her first message on May 6th, Scarey poem or something. I didn't reply at all.
On May 8th I received a PM from Devilgrrl87 asking why I was insulting her poetry. I hadn't looked at the other messages yet as the PM comes up right away when one signs in. I replied to her, I wasn't insulting her, it was a poem by Edgar Allen Poe.
What she is writing is Goth, Wiccan or Pagan, which she is entitled to write, if that's what she prefers.
I don't particularly like it, as far as I am concerned Goth etc. are Cults.
It is also the opinion of many psychologists.
That is why I copy pasted "Poe."
I did make an error and wrote in the wrong message when I said I thought she was referring to Cryonics.
She has her poems scattered throughout the lounge and it is difficult for me at times to find certain threads.
In one of the messages I was replying and changed my mind.
I wrote "deleted" as I believe the delete button was being abused by
someone in the group and not available anymore.. You have to write
something to submit.
Then the two friends of hers started to insult me also, so I of course
replied.
Anyway, I just wanted to set the record straight, I didn't start the
problem, it was djv and Keith who did. Wellander didn't understand. So he said, however, I see he helps make the website. That's alright, he didn't do anything wrong, I just erred and thought it was Keith or djv later. They make it such a mess.
I am fed up with Netscape and Mozilla people lambasting me and attacking me. I say what I have to say, I am not a liar.
I don't care about demons, devils or God or any superstitious religion you all care to discuss. It doesn't frighten me. I am an athiest or perhaps agnostic as I believe without the sun we will all perish. So the Sun perhaps is my so called- God. As for anything Nicole[devilgrrl87] writes, it certainly doesn't frighten me.
When I replied about her spelling on the last so called poem, I was just
offering a suggestion to have it edited. That's all.
No publisher will look at anything written with so many
spelling errors. That's when Hatewa started to reply.
"But I am not entitled to offer any advice.
Hatewa said I was malicious and bitter and nobody said anything." That is not true. He probably didn't read her previous so called "poems".
In a previous message Profman had told her to use 'Spell check'
Then he told her how to get it, which was excellent advice but she preferred not to listen.
I just wanted to put this in perspective. Read all the messages.
I agree I wrote some things I probably shouldn't have written, but push my buttons and I will respond accordingly. But I wasn't the only one.
This is definitely my last message in Sillydog.org.
Unlike McCarthur, "I will not return"
-Lorraine
06 May, 2004 10:54 pm memoirs of the cursed...
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This darkness is a shadowed curse, the base of all your fears. Though I would not change what I am, i've lived this way for years. Every night another life arrested in my arms, can't you hear it, can't you see it, Are you drawn into my charms? I bend your will to make you mine, you share your life with me.It is the blood flowing through my soul that makes me truely me. For centurys long i have been feared, the dark and deadly beast, every night another search for my deadly sinner's feast. As for the power which i speak, I never truely can retire. You've heard my tale, i've told the truth, I am the truth, VAMPIRE.
devilgrrl87 says she wrote the above
If you go and read the thread you will see that all I did was copy paste
an Edgar Allen Poe [b]POEM[\b]
Lorraine
08 May, 2004 9:56 am
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then - in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life - was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.
-Edgar Allan Poe
I thought it was appropriate as it is just my opinion.
In her first message on May 6th, Scarey poem or something. I didn't reply at all.
On May 8th I received a PM from Devilgrrl87 asking why I was insulting her poetry. I hadn't looked at the other messages yet as the PM comes up right away when one signs in. I replied to her, I wasn't insulting her, it was a poem by Edgar Allen Poe.
What she is writing is Goth, Wiccan or Pagan, which she is entitled to write, if that's what she prefers.
I don't particularly like it, as far as I am concerned Goth etc. are Cults.
It is also the opinion of many psychologists.
That is why I copy pasted "Poe."
I did make an error and wrote in the wrong message when I said I thought she was referring to Cryonics.
She has her poems scattered throughout the lounge and it is difficult for me at times to find certain threads.
In one of the messages I was replying and changed my mind.
I wrote "deleted" as I believe the delete button was being abused by
someone in the group and not available anymore.. You have to write
something to submit.
Then the two friends of hers started to insult me also, so I of course
replied.
Anyway, I just wanted to set the record straight, I didn't start the
problem, it was djv and Keith who did. Wellander didn't understand. So he said, however, I see he helps make the website. That's alright, he didn't do anything wrong, I just erred and thought it was Keith or djv later. They make it such a mess.
I am fed up with Netscape and Mozilla people lambasting me and attacking me. I say what I have to say, I am not a liar.
I don't care about demons, devils or God or any superstitious religion you all care to discuss. It doesn't frighten me. I am an athiest or perhaps agnostic as I believe without the sun we will all perish. So the Sun perhaps is my so called- God. As for anything Nicole[devilgrrl87] writes, it certainly doesn't frighten me.
When I replied about her spelling on the last so called poem, I was just
offering a suggestion to have it edited. That's all.
No publisher will look at anything written with so many
spelling errors. That's when Hatewa started to reply.
"But I am not entitled to offer any advice.
Hatewa said I was malicious and bitter and nobody said anything." That is not true. He probably didn't read her previous so called "poems".
In a previous message Profman had told her to use 'Spell check'
Then he told her how to get it, which was excellent advice but she preferred not to listen.
I just wanted to put this in perspective. Read all the messages.
I agree I wrote some things I probably shouldn't have written, but push my buttons and I will respond accordingly. But I wasn't the only one.
This is definitely my last message in Sillydog.org.
Unlike McCarthur, "I will not return"
-Lorraine
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by Devilgrrl87 » Wed 15 Sep, 2004 2:25 am
lorraine, you are entitled to your oppinion as much as anyone, however, so am I. I didn't want to start an argument, i just thought it was a little rude that you made the comment about cryonics. The reason i sent you the pm, is because i figured it would be more respectful than posting it on the site. However, you apparently do not think about respecting others. You belittled me and berated my poetry without just cause. I do not wish to cause further arguments, therefore i will refrain from using sillydog701, save for my instant messages. I hope you derive some satisfaction from this, because as far as i am conserned, sillydog701 has lost its intrest for me. Good Bye.
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by profman » Wed 15 Sep, 2004 10:48 am
Posting to this three-month stale thread is just asking for trouble.
Thread locked.
Thread locked.
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