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[Devilgrrl87]

I cease to live in mortal ways,
I relish days gone by.
So many things I did give up,
sometimes I wonder why.
But then the beauty of the night,
surrounds me and I see.
The things which all the mortals miss,
such as the beauty of a tree.
Upon each leaf the many veins,
which run from side to side.
The way in winter life remains,
when other things have died.
Or take the beauty of the hunt,
when I glory in the chase.
Their heart felt beating one with mine,
as they stare death in the face.
Or traveling far distances,
in the mere blink of an eye.
Anywhere my heart may wish,
I only have to try.
I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.
I'll grow old mixed in this world, untill it meets the end.

Subject changed from "reasons for immortality..." - Admin 6.6.2004

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[Antony]

Can you write “reasons for mortalityâ€

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[djv1]

your a really good writer you should go into the bussiness!!!

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[keith]

haha dustin, i think you've nailed it on the nose!

keith

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[Lorraine]

Devilgrrl87 wrote:

I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.

I guess she thinks CRYONICS is the way to go!
-Lorraine

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[Devilgrrl87]

Devilgrrl87 wrote:

I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.

I guess she thinks CRYONICS is the way to go!
-Lorraine

People seem to like my poetry, the best thing for you to do would be to stop reading my posts if you dont like them! That way, you dont have to read my poems, and i dont have to see your mindless thoughts on the replys!!!!!!!!!!!

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[keith]

Yeah, i totally agree

keith

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[Lorraine]

06 May, 2004 10:54 pm memoirs of the cursed...

08 May, 2004 2:30 pm

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Devilgrrl87 wrote:

Quote:
I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.

djv1


Dustin
Joined: 14 Jan 2004
Posts: 767
Location: Alberta Canada 06 May, 2004 1:03 pm

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Quote:
Wonder abates, horror arose, Terror such as no one knows. Life is fleeting, time goes fast, hold tight to life else it shall pass. Death is born apon times wing ,a shadowed, clouded, evil thing. And when you think alas im gone, be horrified that i live on...

djvl wrote:
It's to my view talking about how life goes by and changes in front of you and yet you still know that you are living through it.

Hope that helps.


I guess she thinks CRYONICS is the way to go!
-Lorraine

Devilgrrl87


Nicole
Joined: 16 Apr 2004
Posts: 31
14 May, 2004 11:03 pm

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Lorraine wrote:
Devilgrrl87 wrote:

Quote:
I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.


I guess she thinks CRYONICS is the way to go!
-Lorraine






People seem to like my poetry, the best thing for you to do would be to stop reading my posts if you dont like them! That way, you dont have to read my poems, and i dont have to see your mindless thoughts on the replys!!!!!!!!!!!

Lorraine


Lorraine
Joined: 21 Apr 2003
Posts: 606
14 May, 2004 3:57 am

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djv1


Dustin
Joined: 14 Jan 2004
Posts: 767
Location: Alberta Canada 14 May, 2004 3:47 pm

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What do you mean "deleted" Lorraine, If you don't like the poetry Don't Read It!!



keith


keith
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
Posts: 279
Location: Alberta, Canada 15 May, 2004 3:43 am

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Yeah. Not trying to be rude, but what have you got against such awsome poetry? i don't see a problem in it. but comments like previously seen, i don't think are all that necessary,
not tryin to be mean, thats just the way i see it

keith

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[djv1]

Honestly Lorraine, what did that have to do with anything? and what was the point of putting when we joined and all the info about us? if people wanted to know this they could refer to my profile!

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[Hatewa]

I cease to live in mortal ways,
I relish days gone by.
So many things I did give up,
sometimes I wonder why.
But then the beauty of the night,
surrounds me and I see.
The things which all the mortals miss,
such as the beauty of a tree.
Upon each leaf the many veins,
which run from side to side.
The way in winter life remains,
when other things have died.
Or take the beauty of the hunt,
when I glory in the chase.
Their heart felt beating one with mine,
as they stare death in the face.
Or traveling far distances,
in the mere blink of an eye.
Anywhere my heart may wish,
I only have to try.
I'll far outlive all my past loves,
and all my many friends.
I'll grow old mixed in this world, untill it meets the end.

Does Devilgirl, like the Praying Mantis, always eat her lovers?
Hatewa

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